Burn the Deck
John Brunswick

How Storytellers Win When Everyone Else Sounds the Same

Story Fundamentals

Your product means nothing until it means something to someone specific

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Key Takeaway

TL;DR

Your product means nothing until it means something to someone specific. Sellers fail by presenting capabilities floating in space, unanchored to reality. The fix: tie every feature to a specific person facing a specific challenge. 'AI-powered analytics' creates zero pull. 'A CIO who now spots issues before anyone notices' creates a picture buyers step into. Story is change. Anchoring makes it relevant. Do this and your message travels. Skip it and you're presenting into a void.

Your product has incredible capabilities. Your roadmap is compelling. Your technology is genuinely innovative. None of that matters if buyers can't see themselves in your story.

The most common mistake in B2B sales isn't weak positioning or poor demos. It's presenting capabilities in a vacuum, unanchored to anyone's reality. This chapter teaches you the foundational skill that separates forgettable pitches from conversations that move deals forward: anchoring everything you say to people, their specific needs, and their context.

What's a Story?

Story is change. Something was one way. Now it's different. That's it.

'Our platform has AI-powered analytics' is not a story. Nothing changed. Nothing moved. It's a feature statement floating in space.

'A CIO who couldn't see problems until customers complained now spots issues before anyone notices' is a story. There's a before. There's an after. There's a person whose life is different.

The formula is simple: Problem, Transformation, Outcome. But here's the catch: generic stories fail just like generic feature lists fail. 'A company improved efficiency' creates no mental image. 'A logistics VP reduced delivery time by 40% and avoided a $2M penalty' creates a picture your buyer can see themselves in.

The Building Blocks

Every anchored story has the same basic ingredients. Master these, and you can construct a relevant narrative for any situation.

Step 1

Person

Who experiences the change?

Step 2

Situation

What was their frustrating reality?

Step 3

Obstacle

What blocked them from solving this?

Step 4

Transformation

What changed for them?

Step 5

Outcome

What measurable result did they achieve?

An Example

Person (Protagonist)

The character who experiences the change. In B2B, this is typically someone who mirrors your buyer's role or priorities. Making it about a person gives the audience someone to relate to.

Example

Focus on one main character to keep the story clear and personal. 'Jane, the VP of Operations' beats 'operations teams.'

How

Who in your customer's organization experienced this change, and what is their role?

GoalIdentify a specific person whose role mirrors your buyer.
Value to BuyerGives them someone to root for and see themselves in.
Situation (Before State)

What was your protagonist's daily reality before the change? Describe their personal experience first: the frustration, the wasted hours, the stress. Then connect it to the business impact. People feel before they calculate.

Example

'Marcus spent his first two hours every morning hunting for customer history, often walking into calls unprepared and embarrassed. His team's close rate suffered as a result.' The person's pain makes the business metric meaningful.

How

What was their typical day like before? What frustrated them most?

GoalDescribe the protagonist's frustrating daily reality before the change.
Value to BuyerHelps them feel the pain and recognize their own situation.
Obstacle

What blocked your protagonist from solving this themselves? Show how the obstacle affected their daily work and confidence before explaining the business constraint. The friction should feel personal.

Example

'Marcus tried building his own tracking spreadsheet, but it was always out of date by the time he needed it. He felt like he was always one step behind.' The personal struggle makes the obstacle relatable.

How

What did they try before, and why did it fail to solve the problem?

GoalShow what prevented them from solving the problem on their own.
Value to BuyerValidates why they have not fixed this yet without your help.
Transformation

The moment everything changed for your protagonist. Describe what they can now do differently, how their day feels different, before explaining what the solution is. The person's new reality is the story; the product is just how they got there.

Example

'Marcus now walks into every call knowing exactly where the conversation left off. He feels prepared and his customers notice.' The felt change comes before the feature that enabled it.

How

What can they do now that they could not do before? How does their day feel different?

GoalDescribe the moment and experience of the change happening.
Value to BuyerLets them visualize what success actually looks like.
Outcome (After State)

The result after the transformation, anchored to the person's changed daily reality. Show the felt experience first, then attach the metric. Describe what they can now do, how their day changed, or what stress disappeared before quantifying it.

Example

'Sarah now leaves by 5pm and coaches her team instead of firefighting. Response times dropped from 4 hours to 12 minutes.' The metric proves her transformation, not the other way around.

How

What measurable result can you share? How did their work life improve?

GoalShare the measurable result anchored to the person's new reality.
Value to BuyerProves the transformation is real with concrete evidence.

Why This Works: Cognitive Load Reduction

These building blocks create what researchers call 'narrative structure,' which dramatically reduces cognitive load. When information follows a logical beginning-middle-end sequence, listeners don't have to work as hard to process it.

Stories essentially act as a scaffold for information, reducing the mental effort needed to understand complex content. Your buyer can relax into the story instead of straining to make sense of disconnected facts.

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The Anchoring Rules

Capabilities floating in space create no gravitational pull. Features without context are just noise. Your AI-powered analytics module means nothing until someone can see their 3 AM crisis calls disappearing because of it.

This is the anchoring principle: Every capability, every feature, every benefit must be tied to a specific person facing a specific challenge in a specific context. Without that anchor, your message drifts away the moment you leave the room.

Why This Works: Self-Relevance Processing

Neuroscience research confirms what experienced sellers know intuitively: self-relevant information activates deeper processing and significantly improves memory. When buyers hear something connected to their world, their brains literally work harder to encode it.

Psychologists call this the 'self-reference effect.' Information processed in relation to the self is remembered better than information processed in other ways. When you anchor your message to their specific situation, you're not just being polite. You're leveraging how human memory actually works.

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Workbook: The Anchoring Checklist

Before any presentation, pitch, or conversation, run through this checklist:

Ask Yourself

1

Can I name a specific person (or role) this story is about?

If no:

Add a protagonist who mirrors your buyer

2

Have I described their situation before the change?

If no:

Paint the 'before' picture with specific pain points

3

Is there an obstacle that makes the transformation meaningful?

If no:

Identify what was preventing success

4

Did I show the change, not just describe the product?

If no:

Reframe features as transformations

5

Is the outcome concrete and measurable?

If no:

Add specific metrics, time saved, or qualitative improvements

6

Could my champion retell this in 30 seconds?

If no:

Simplify until the core transformation is crystal clear

The Bottom Line

Your product exists in a sea of similar products. Your features can be researched in minutes by any buyer with an AI assistant. Your competitive differentiation isn't in what you do. It's in how well you understand who you do it for.

Every time you're tempted to lead with a capability, stop. Ask yourself: Who is this for? What's their situation? What changes for them? What does their world look like after?

Anchor first. Always.

The sellers who figure this out win conversations. The ones who don't present into voids and wonder why nothing sticks. Now that you understand how to construct a story, let's examine why stories are so powerful at a neurological level.

Next
Why Stories Win Deals

References

Behavioral science research supporting this chapter

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Sweller, J. (1988)
Cognitive Load During Problem Solving: Effects on Learning
Key Finding: Narrative structure dramatically reduces cognitive load; when information follows a logical beginning-middle-end sequence, listeners don't have to work as hard to process it
Application: The building blocks of story create a scaffold that reduces mental effort needed to understand complex content
Related to: Narrative structure and cognitive load reduction
2
Willingham, D.T. (2009)
Why Don't Students Like School?: A Cognitive Scientist Answers Questions About How the Mind Works
Key Finding: Stories essentially act as a scaffold for information, reducing the mental effort needed to understand complex content
Application: Your buyer can relax into the story instead of straining to make sense of disconnected facts
Related to: Narrative structure and cognitive load reduction
3
Willingham, D.T. (2009)
Why Don't Students Like School?
Key Finding: Our brains are wired to organize and remember information as stories; disconnected facts and bullet point lists slip away quickly, while narratives stick
Application: Story is the envelope that packages technical truth with context so it can travel from person to person without degradation
Related to: Story as knowledge transfer vehicle
4
Denning, S. (2005)
The Leader's Guide to Storytelling
Key Finding: A good story creates familiarity and trust in a way that dry facts cannot; narratives resonate more deeply than specifications
Application: In B2B sales, a narrative about transformation will resonate more deeply than a spreadsheet of specifications
Related to: Story as knowledge transfer vehicle
5
Swap et al. (2001)
Using Mentoring and Storytelling to Transfer Knowledge in the Workplace
Key Finding: The envelope metaphor is validated by behavioral science: when you provide a narrative, you're handing the buyer an encapsulated message they can retell accurately
Application: Your champion can carry a story 'envelope' through the organization without needing to understand technical details inside
Related to: Story as knowledge transfer vehicle
6
Rogers et al. (1977)
Self-Reference and the Encoding of Personal Information
Key Finding: Self-relevant information activates deeper processing and significantly improves memory compared to other encoding strategies
Application: When you anchor your message to buyers' specific situations, you leverage how human memory actually works
Related to: Self-relevance processing and memory
7
Symons, C.S. & Johnson, B.T. (1997)
The Self-Reference Effect in Memory: A Meta-Analysis
Key Finding: Information processed in relation to the self is remembered better than information processed in other ways; the self-reference effect is robust across studies
Application: Anchoring messages to the buyer's own context creates stronger memory encoding than generic information
Related to: Self-relevance processing and memory
8
Heath, C. & Heath, D. (2007)
Made to Stick: Why Some Ideas Survive and Others Die
Key Finding: Facts wrapped in stories are remembered 12 times better than facts alone; in Stanford studies, 63% of people remembered stories versus only 5% who remembered statistics
Application: When buyers hear a story about transformation, their entire brain activates, making your message both memorable and persuasive
Related to: Neurochemistry and recall of stories
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Heath, C. (2007)
Stanford Classroom Speech Experiments
Key Finding: In Stanford classroom experiments, 63% of listeners remembered stories while only 5% remembered statistics presented without narrative context
Application: Stories are dramatically more memorable than statistics alone
Related to: Neurochemistry and recall of stories
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Zak, P.J. (2015)
Why Inspiring Stories Make Us React: The Neuroscience of Narrative
Key Finding: Stories trigger neurochemical responses: cortisol for focus and attention, oxytocin for empathy and trust, dopamine for pleasure and motivation
Application: This potent combination makes your message both memorable and persuasive
Related to: Neurochemistry and recall of stories